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If I walked away, would you care?
If I disappeared, would it matter?
Maybe it is something I cannot bear.
But for you not a single thought shattered.

If I was as good would you care?
Or is it only the skills that you seek?
For if I was to go, not a word to anyone.
Nothing would be less bleak

But if she was to go, you would cry.
You would return to a shell
Throwing your pain to the sky
All because she was more skilled than me.

Do you judge by who they are?
Or what you have to gain?
Because now that I see, who you want to be.
To me you do not care for others pain.

I thought we were friends.
That I could trust you
But in the end
That proved not to be true.
This is a little thing i thought of
so many people act like this, not caring for WHO you are, only WHAT you are
including some i call friends......
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Mystic-LightsCx Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, you really are a good writer <3

Are you ok? D8
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:icontwilight-and-konan:
ha thank you ^^
.........
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Mystic-LightsCx Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's amazing, well-written and just plain touching. Also, the fact that I relate, adds up.

If something's wrong, tell your REAL friends, okay? ^^ We'll be there for you.
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:icontwilight-and-konan:
thank you :'D
i added a bit at the end i forgot XD

this isnt whats upsetting me, this poem is just related to something that happened when i was very young, with someone i knew
and i mean VERY young XD
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Mystic-LightsCx Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, okay then ^^
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Uber-Dan Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Are you ok? This is very well written.
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:icontwilight-and-konan:
its nothing to do with this, and thanks
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Uber-Dan Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
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SesshaXIII Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you ok?
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:icontwilight-and-konan:
i have stuff going on....but nothing to do with this poem
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